whoa, this story is deep and really creative. Selena had found a way to comfort herself in a way noboby seems to understand and she is laughed at for it. But she still sticks to it which can be a challange in itself. It is hard to keep a habit or to be yourself when you are judged and critisised for it. Selena is a strong character. I really liked that about her. Great job.

Your story is very touching. I loved reading it. Keep up the good work!

Wow, I love how everything just flows and your writing style is great!

Aw this story is so cute but sad :( I like how you put different candles that she has in italics. Great story. Keep writing :D

Cute. I really like how you added the sents of the candles in between every few lines or so. It adds a nice touch. Interesting story.

i really liked this! it was an original piece, and the flow was quite smooth throughout the whole story - as in, there weren't any awkward pauses or anything.. i like the way you linked candles and fireflies together. yeah.