this chapter was HELLA confusinq. :/

Damn, that's intense. More people should read this, it's really good. *glares at non-reviewers*

The characters are building up nicely, as they usually do in your stories. And the plot has just thickened in a very appealing way.

It's gotten to the point where the name Rostov sends a chill down my spine.

You're such a tease with that necklace bit! Anyway, I'm interested in exactly what did happen to Surrian. Does she still have the mind of a child or did the Maelstorm change her in more way than one? I guess I'll find out later, but curse the anticipation!

Wow, more plot. Moving along nicely. Can't wait to see what happens. Poor kid.

Whoa, your writing style has changed a lot! I like it, it's easier to read. This is good stuff. I'm interested.

nice intro i guess, but i cant really say anything about this chapter now can i?

its a good story, but i got confused with whos the main charater