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spiderfly 2006-08-04 . chapter 1
This feels like something I would write. I love the imagery 'grass that looked soft until you sat down'. It's such a random collection of thoughts yet it pieces together to very well. The ending is snappy and urban-poetic. I really like this. Keep it up!
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