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Reviews For: My Head: Inner Workings

bex (theshadowinthemirror)
2006-09-05
ch 1, anon.
abusehey :)I like this, I'm a bit of a los-kop, but I guess that's different. :p

I don't mind helping with assinments, but there are three problems 1)time difference 2)I can't speel to save my life 3) I think your techer would deduct makes for S.A english in it (:P yes South Africa has it's own english!)But I would still love to help... really.
White is a Sin
2006-08-01
ch 1,
abusehmm...it is good...Yes you can rhyme...you just have to try. Yes, this was interesting...lots of ruckus in my head at the moment ^.^

Thanks for the reviews that was really sweet! ^_^
a lonely september
2006-07-10
ch 4,
abusei love how they all have around the same theme. they are a nice read.
Love-and- Lust
2006-07-09
ch 1,
abusethis is good, not as good as some of ur others though
Comawhite13
2006-07-05
ch 4,
abuseYou show some real promise. Keep writing!

-Coma
awannabewriter
2006-07-03
ch 4,
abuseYES, AS A MATTER OF FACT... I can relate to this. Nicely done.
awannabewriter
2006-07-03
ch 3,
abuseI don't know about this one. Its different from the others, and yet unique.
awannabewriter
2006-07-03
ch 2,
abuseI think the word you are searching for is "scatterbrained." Nice work here, again :-)
awannabewriter
2006-07-03
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. So like maybe you can find a tiny, yet expandable broom and stick it in your ear or up a nostril and clean out your head (Just kidding, lol) I know what you mean though.
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