|Reviews for The Jump|
| Burnt Bread 7/4/06 . chapter 1
Another update so soon? It's safe to expect more frequent updates in the future?
I've read this before - you're updating it?
This version (if i remember correctly) seems to be less abstract, are you preparing to write a longer piece about it? Or will it remain a oneshot? I like the twist, it's very clever... I think i said that last time too. Like your work, keep it comming.