wow incredible so far cant wait to read more, the suspense is killing me

YAY, AN UPDATE!

And a good one, nice cliffhanger here.

((Now don't make me wait forever again.))

Hey its been a while. :D And your still writing this story. Yay. I hope I get out of hiatus soon. I'm a bad reviewer- so I'll just say that this chapter is very interesting mostly on the sex part.

adakua

Very good so far. I like the connections you have made with SU. I really want to know what kind of consequences Lara's ability may have, if there is any, and I really want to know what the BIG thing is going to be in this one. Keep on writting!

Haha.. the last part was quite funny.. with Ava pestering Tru like that!! Anyway.. this is a great chapter!! I really would like to read more about Trace again.. he's a nice guy.. And I can't wait for the next chapter!! :P

Hello, starts out interesting gets more interesting then gets a bit romance. That's fine (developing that side of me lately) but i would like to know whats up with the "perfect world" syndrome. I mean he's a mentally fragmented guy and she seems to have some of her own problems and yet together they seem perfect.

Well Did she? Or did she not? Lol...course she did! Course Tru slept with Shane! How could she resist him? So cute...and lovely...and so there! I'm joking!

Yeh...um, I'll shut up now! Great chapter! I love this story :) It's my favourite out of all of them...though the original is pretty amazing too!

Update soon!

New rule: STOP TAUNTING YOUR READERS! hahahahaha

Okay. I am VERY glad to see that you're working on this, & while I know it's hard for you to concentrate because you have a bazillion ideas floating around in your head, please don't forget about this story! There have to be more than 4 chapters!

Um, waterless, how can you criticize this person when you make grammar/spelling mistakes in your own reviews. It is an awkward time for me.

One word GREAT lol!! ;) *Mel

It’s exactly my favourite type of stories- with romance and supernatural at the same time. The story is becoming even more interesting- the relation between Tru and Shane as well as the meeting between these mediators. You write in a really good style. Waiting for more!

Thank-you, this chapter has detail. *claps hands* Anyway, I think you should right out the numbers into words unless they are over 100. Also

"They had so many things to talk about."

"They have so many things to talk." I've kinda have been seening you switich your tenses in words, but they ar minor. So I didn't bother. Well Actually the whole bottom paragraphs had switched their tense into past. While the top ones were present. Watch out for that. Nice work so far. Till next time

waterhealer

*sighes* Detail-less. This chapter needs more details, I actually gotten a little confused with the middle. But I finally got the whole idea. I remember myself writing like this. Till next time

waterhealer

Alright shot me in the head, no I'm kdding. Sorry that wasn't here to support your story, school had been taking alot of my time. Actually I barely had time to finish my chapters. Well so far so good, I cannot find any widely mistakes here. (You're lucky I suck at grammar. Uh well you could have added more details in the middle. But other than that I see nothing wrong.

Till next time

Omigod! They slept together?! Lol. I want all the hot and sordid details, haha, I'm joking. Miss Dailey has class :D

Oh yeah Ava sounded like one of those really stuck up their own ass movie stars at the end when she said 'You are absolutely glowing.' Well in my opinion she did...anyway...

Um, anyway I'm kind of down because I wrote a better review than this and i clicked off the box by accident. I hate myself.

Update soon I beg of you? Lol. I need more!