Oh, I really liked this!! You have a good ear for rhythm and what sounds good when thrown together. It was very cool to read.

Oh, and I recognize the song on your profile: "If Love Should Count You Worthy". I LOVE that song. I just sang that song with my choir last month, and it was one of my favorites that we've sang all year. I really do love it. It's cool though to find someone else who not only knows the same song, but loves it just as much as I did. :D

Well, props again on your poem. Keep writing!

I like! *applaudes*, write on!

~Anna~ ^_^