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| d666lisa 2007-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseHi brilliant start, you really should update :-) |
| wama... 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abusehikie sis! ^_~ SOON? you haven't update for almost a year! hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah' i want you to continue!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~! |
| i write with red ink 2006-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh... this is lovely. No critique, just update, okays? Thanks for the review, I may continue that story! Keep on writing! |
| controv3rsyxx 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abusei noticed that the same names were shared for this story and the other one, If You Were Mine. is there a link between the two? |
| Coup 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuse"I wanted to look away y heart skipped a beat" Just a little typo over there. No big deal. |
| Plinky 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice - really interesting. The first few lines were lovely - really interesting way to start a story. I'm intrigued... this is actually a really interesting beginning. Unique. A couple of grammatical errors, and I'd advise against making Tyler too perfect, but apart from that, lovely! Really nicely described atmosphere, concisely written, didn't drag at all. I like the lyrics, too. :D Keep writing! |
| LoveMySoul 2006-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story, in my opinion, is statring off well so I suggest that you keep writing. |
| Doll in Pink C0nverse 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. I'm very speechless of what to say next...so lets leave it at that. |
| sofiya05 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abusehey, 1st of all great song! i love it. listen to it all the time and fits in really well with this chapter. ooh i like this thing, just recently me and my friends were talking about past lives, we're really into theories about life. so it seems like this Tyler guy already knows that it's something to do with past lives but am not too sure, so i'll just wait for you to update...hopefully soon. Sofi |
| Ramza the Heretic 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's not that bad a piece of writing. Other than a few minor errors in tenses, I can't see anything wrong with this. By the way, you won't mind giving me a critique or two for my latest work, will you? And, if I may ask, what country are you from? 'A. Maths' stands for Additional Mathematics, doesn't it? |