|Reviews for Ice Cream|
| creating.myself 10/3/11 . chapter 1
This piece is really neat ) I like the comparison of love/snuggling to something as nice, refreshing, and fun as ice cream. ) I kinda wish you would have written more, however...this piece doesn't quite seem complete, somehow. But it's still really good, and I like it. ))
| The-Golden-Hour 3/28/09 . chapter 1
...m tasty xD
| KaseyLovesNoOne 9/9/06 . chapter 1
No need to add more. It promises what it delivers. Neat little double entendre in the last two lines (whether you intentionally did that or not, I don't know). Nice work.
| arcane devices 8/28/06 . chapter 1
I agree with KonekOniko in its entirety. and as she said.. it's fine by itself. - ADD-san
| Needa S 7/29/06 . chapter 1
Great imagery. Nicely done.
| karmakaze 7/28/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. I like.
| citrus scented 7/27/06 . chapter 1
like ice cream drips onto hot summer fingertips...hmm very similar. its a nice image isnt it. your arms wrapt around me...I love that. simple. like it should be.
| ClassicTrick 7/18/06 . chapter 1
but still amazinggreat jobCT
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/13/06 . chapter 1
Succinctly sweet, need more be said?
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 7/8/06 . chapter 1
Short but great imagery! I enjoyed reading it_ This is Spirit-of-the-flames under a new name_ Keep up the good work_
| KonekOniko 7/8/06 . chapter 1
I like the title! I guess you could go on with the poem, but it seems alright by itself.
| B. M. Reed 7/6/06 . chapter 1
i like the imagery. good job :]
| Lellida 7/6/06 . chapter 1
M delicious. I like it a lot.
| hiding behind amber eyes 7/5/06 . chapter 1
hum...i guess you could keep going with it but it's ok just as is. i would like to see what you could do if you kept going but this is good too.
| dancingintherain 7/5/06 . chapter 1
nice comparison- D good as always