This piece is really neat ) I like the comparison of love/snuggling to something as nice, refreshing, and fun as ice cream. ) I kinda wish you would have written more, however...this piece doesn't quite seem complete, somehow. But it's still really good, and I like it. ))

...m tasty xD

No need to add more. It promises what it delivers. Neat little double entendre in the last two lines (whether you intentionally did that or not, I don't know). Nice work.

I agree with KonekOniko in its entirety. and as she said.. it's fine by itself. - ADD-san

Great imagery. Nicely done.

Interesting. I like.

like ice cream drips onto hot summer fingertips...hmm very similar. its a nice image isnt it. your arms wrapt around me...I love that. simple. like it should be.

Simple&Short

but still amazinggreat jobCT

Succinctly sweet, need more be said?

Short but great imagery! I enjoyed reading it_ This is Spirit-of-the-flames under a new name_ Keep up the good work_

I like the title! I guess you could go on with the poem, but it seems alright by itself.

i like the imagery. good job :]

M delicious. I like it a lot.

hum...i guess you could keep going with it but it's ok just as is. i would like to see what you could do if you kept going but this is good too.

nice comparison- D good as always