so beautiful. you have talent for this kind of stuff. i congradulate you, it's so beautiful.

-Phoenix

This is very good! very true too. i never did get the hang of repeating lines in my poems. I could feel the pain, and hate in it. (Oh! the 7th chapter of A Destiny Of Another Time is up!^^)

Oh my god, Nina this is so beautiful! I almost cried; This is really great! It touches you right in the heart, and I think everyone can relate. I especially love the line "This bitter sweet bliss of your cold soulless kiss". Pure excellence! ^_^ Keep it up!

hey, thanks fr the review. I dunno what u want me to help u with, it's good. but it's more of a song than a poem, isnt it?

very nice, thanks for the review by the way, really nice i love the way you repeat for chorus, like a song that is. love it! hey if you want you can check me out on myspace, nicole hill, or IM me at aol, rayefirerh, or on Yahoo,rayefrie1990, thanks for your review, love your stuff, i will review your others for you too.

I love this poem. I have felt this many times. You did a really good job!

keep writing!

This poem is great! I love the feeling that it portrays, in fact it would be something that I would write myself. I really like the lines "Always thought love was a fairy tale, 'Till reality dropped its ugly veil. I love how you wrote that and repeated it thoughout the poem. I didn't really like how you used the word "scat" it fits but it just seemed to be placed there to make things rhyme more. Good job

Megan Jitsonlyme07