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| Hard Metal 2006-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseAlthough short, but very touching, i liked it. And thanks for your review, i was afraid readers wont get my point , but u did ^^ ! thank u! |
| Teddy Geiger 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I can never seem to make peoms actually have a ryme sceem. They all seem to just be in poem format. |
| bittersweet.season 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusevery deep. i like this alot. |
| ten pts above average 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuse"Kiss the sky holding the moon so tender" another amazing line! for being so short this is an amazing poem and brings so much emotion... |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseThats beautiful. I love the use of the moon in poetry, as it is one of my greatest inspirations. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseIt was short, but deep within those awesum cryptic words...i can see a meaning, and i like it very much. Nice imagery^_^ I especially loved the first line just so u no! |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuselike it. ryhmes.. |
| Anaare 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, it had a somehow ethereal feeling to it, "holding the moon". Good imagery, good choice of words and rhyme. All in all, another success! |
| Godly Luke Staden 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI thought the poem was very good. the one dislike i have about it, well not dislike but more of a reservation towards it is the fact every line rhymed. all in all it was a very good poem. Keep writing ~Godly Luke Staden~ |
| MonsterGirl 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abusesounds very pretty =) i like how you ended each line =) anyways nice work =) |
| hOpeinareddress 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. I love this. |
| classic violet 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseBeyond beautiful. I adore this, so very pretty. |
| Claly 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseNice job, I love short poems like these. =) |
| convoluted cartoon 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseHow can one get such beauty in just a few lines? I donno, but you certainly did =] tres pretty poem |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseGood rhyming and all. Also, thanks for the review, hope we can review each other more. |