Although short, but very touching, i liked it.

And thanks for your review, i was afraid readers wont get my point , but u did ^^ ! thank u!

Great poem. I can never seem to make peoms actually have a ryme sceem. They all seem to just be in poem format.

very deep. i like this alot.

"Kiss the sky holding the moon so tender" another amazing line! for being so short this is an amazing poem and brings so much emotion...

Thats beautiful. I love the use of the moon in poetry, as it is one of my greatest inspirations.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~

It was short, but deep within those awesum cryptic words...i can see a meaning, and i like it very much. Nice imagery^_^ I especially loved the first line just so u no!

like it. ryhmes..

I really enjoyed reading this, it had a somehow ethereal feeling to it, "holding the moon". Good imagery, good choice of words and rhyme. All in all, another success!

I thought the poem was very good. the one dislike i have about it, well not dislike but more of a reservation towards it is the fact every line rhymed. all in all it was a very good poem.

Keep writing

~Godly Luke Staden~

sounds very pretty =) i like how you ended each line =) anyways nice work =)

Absolutely amazing. I love this.

Beyond beautiful. I adore this, so very pretty.

Nice job, I love short poems like these. =)

How can one get such beauty in just a few lines? I donno, but you certainly did =] tres pretty poem

Good rhyming and all. Also, thanks for the review, hope we can review each other more.