You had me staying up all night reading this. This is exactly the story I've wanted to find and read for so long. It was perfect. And you incorporated faith into it; that made it wholesome. I fell in love with Ryan! I was bawling when he died! Wow, this is the best story I've ever read.

I thought your story was very good. Even though it was so sad I still liked it. I knew that there wouldn't be the happily ever after but I still hoped for it.

This is a review for chapters, five through twelve. I'll probably read some more later. So, you're a christian huh? I go to church and although I am saved, I don't read my bible as much and the story I'm working on, is enough to make anyone blush, but I've had the idea for this story, All signs point to you- for a long time now and I may as well get it out of the way.

About the story, it's sad that Ryan feels as if he has no one he can depend on. I guess that goes to show that the only true joy you can have is when you are at peace with God. I guess that's what he's missing. Jump's a very vivid story, beautiful and poignant. From beginning to end probably, but I wouldn't know, because I'm only starting 13. I'll review again after I read more chapters later, ok?

Great title too, by the way!
Navaura~

Jen's very perceptive. Love your descriptions here. Hmmn, really short chapters thought, make a five to ten minute read max for now. I wonder if they get longer? Don't tell me, that's my own surprise.

Wow, this is a beautiful beginning. Really heart wrenching.

hey hannah
wow i read jump that story is amazing. it kinda is a reflection of my life. to read and be able to connect with each character was amazing. you have a great talent and yout writing is awsome. i hope you continue writng and never stop.

samantha

Wow, I really really love this. The ending was kind of surprising to me, but I don't think it could have ended in any other way. :]

i love this story. it's really really beautiful. I really have no idea how you could make it better. thanks for having God in it.

hey..I love this story...what I got out of it is that not to judge someone by what they seem and that anyone can change no matter there past..like it said...I think not only Ryan was saved from his torment...but so was Jen and Veronica. Jen was showed that God does what he does for a reason and Veronica was shown she could change and become a better person...she saw that she was the one who was sick...thanks for writing this story it was very inspiring...you are very talented...

Hey there, Agent Firefly. I was cruisin' Ficpress when I found this, and I have to say I like it a lot. I've read a fair number of stories on here, all with intense descriptions, twisty plots and such, but this is what I've been really looking for. It's simple, sweet, but also very touching and emotionally real. I thoroughly enjoyed it; thanks so much for writing such a wonderful tale.

God bless! :)

~S. Sage

I really enjoyed reading this story I started yesterday and finished a couple of minutes ago . At first I was upset with the way things ended but after reading your Afterword I understand why you ended things they way you did I'm currently working on my own christian/ romance story and I hope it will turn out as great as yours did

-Jayn

Good Story

Excellent story...though still sad that he died...but I guess, when you think about it, it kinda had to end that way. Again, great story...you should get it published.

I loved your story. It was, as you said, very emotional. Ryan, oh my gosh, I loved his character... but Jake was my favorite character in this story by far! His happy personality, and his easy habit to make tons of jokes... he just really lightened up the story for me.

Thanks for writing this, it was really enlightening to me in the way real christians act and their willingness to forgive and move on with their lives, always trust in Jesus, and know that everything is under His control. In other words, this story has brought me even closer to God. :D

The last two chapters (50 & 51) almost made me cry. =(
But they also made me smile. hm... strange isn't it?

Thank you for writing this. though I'll admit I'll miss getting emails saying you updated. XP. Keep writing! **mwah**