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| samantha 2008-08-05 ch 52, anon. | abusehey hannah wow i read jump that story is amazing. it kinda is a reflection of my life. to read and be able to connect with each character was amazing. you have a great talent and yout writing is awsome. i hope you continue writng and never stop. samantha |
| TheatrePhunk 2007-11-27 ch 52,  | abuseWow, I really really love this. The ending was kind of surprising to me, but I don't think it could have ended in any other way. :] |
| hija de jesucristo 2007-07-21 ch 51, | abusei love this story. it's really really beautiful. I really have no idea how you could make it better. thanks for having God in it. |
| kalan 2007-06-13 ch 52, anon. | abusehey..I love this story...what I got out of it is that not to judge someone by what they seem and that anyone can change no matter there past..like it said...I think not only Ryan was saved from his torment...but so was Jen and Veronica. Jen was showed that God does what he does for a reason and Veronica was shown she could change and become a better person...she saw that she was the one who was sick...thanks for writing this story it was very inspiring...you are very talented... |
| Sophomoric Sage 2007-06-01 ch 52, | abuseHey there, Agent Firefly. I was cruisin' Ficpress when I found this, and I have to say I like it a lot. I've read a fair number of stories on here, all with intense descriptions, twisty plots and such, but this is what I've been really looking for. It's simple, sweet, but also very touching and emotionally real. I thoroughly enjoyed it; thanks so much for writing such a wonderful tale. God bless! :) ~S. Sage |
| Jayn06 2007-05-26 ch 52, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this story I started yesterday and finished a couple of minutes ago . At first I was upset with the way things ended but after reading your Afterword I understand why you ended things they way you did I'm currently working on my own christian/ romance story and I hope it will turn out as great as yours did -Jayn |
| Writing4Eternity 2007-05-26 ch 52, | abuseGood Story |
| Sandhara 2007-05-25 ch 52, | abuseExcellent story...though still sad that he died...but I guess, when you think about it, it kinda had to end that way. Again, great story...you should get it published. |
| VanillaOreo 2007-05-25 ch 52, | abuseI loved your story. It was, as you said, very emotional. Ryan, oh my gosh, I loved his character... but Jake was my favorite character in this story by far! His happy personality, and his easy habit to make tons of jokes... he just really lightened up the story for me. Thanks for writing this, it was really enlightening to me in the way real christians act and their willingness to forgive and move on with their lives, always trust in Jesus, and know that everything is under His control. In other words, this story has brought me even closer to God. :D |
| orangejello 2007-05-25 ch 51, | abuseThe last two chapters (50 & 51) almost made me cry. =( But they also made me smile. hm... strange isn't it? Thank you for writing this. though I'll admit I'll miss getting emails saying you updated. XP. Keep writing! **mwah** |
| et 2007-05-25 ch 52, anon. | abuseok ok this should so be a best seller |
| under the influence 2007-05-25 ch 51, | abuseyay...I think it was a good ending...there was one part where you wrote 'Val' and I think you meant 'Veronica'... |
| et 2007-05-24 ch 50, anon. | abusegr it should be more happy-not too happy just a bit more just not a letdown |
| Writing4Eternity 2007-05-24 ch 50, | abuseThe end... |
| under the influence 2007-05-24 ch 50, | abusesniff sniff...he died...does anyone know Veronica did it? |