*applauds* My own piece on Fourth of July night was rather darker and more depressing than this, I'm afraid. This is much prettier, and a nice change from my own thoughts on Independence Day. (Thoughts about something much less harmless raining down from the sky.) I don't usually like poetry, but this is wonderful!

Lilz

Okay, have you ever listened to a song that's so beautiful that it sends a delightful chill rushing up your rigid spine and then you begin relax because you feel so at ease listening to the long chords gliding and flowing together and it takes you away? That's how I felt when I read this! It's absolutley wonderful, I can even descibe how much adore this peice of art! I usually try to pick a favorite line or two in a poem but I just couldn't find one because they were all so radiant. Excellent, gorgeous, FANTABULUOS!

Wow, this poem really made me smile. I like looking at fireworks in this way. I like how it the first part you said "they" fade away...it kinda showed that even though the fireworks are gone we still have the memory of their light and beauty engraved in our mind for seconds afterwards. Good job

itsonlyme07