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| poetic abortion 2006-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful. Just beautiful. I love how you use the theme - fire - and how you romantasize it; I love that about your poetry, actually. It is always hinting toward romantic, even when heartbreak, and I love the little imagery, everything. It. Is. So. Adorable. ~* Noelle |
| beti213 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is gorgeous. just this tight little package of emotion & imagery. I love it.awesome how you put these personal little twists on everything so that they mean more: the second stanza feels like it's going to be a cliche until "tangled"-no heroine of poetry has tangled hair, and that's what makes you different-more human. and that last stanza hit close to home. great stuff. keep it up. |
| Femme de Dieu 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, yes! Me, too! Plain, simple, and perfect! |