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| gulistanlik 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseOh so this is 4th July event that she was reflecting on! Aha! Really cute! gulistanlik |
| Ish Mish Kiki 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWhoot whoot! Cute couple ;D |
| Tad Zendol 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAw. I loved this, Gray. I must say, in the book, as well as this little piece, calling Kyle "K" confused me quite a bit. I always thought that you were simply writing "kay". =) Good job, girl. Tad |
| theangelonyourright 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseaww Tucker and Nat are the bestI love them |
| FrozenRose313 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abusehehehehe they're still so cute. you should insert that somewhere in "rednecks drink dr pepper". |
| HungarianPotatoFarmer 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuse:) I liked it. It was really good. Tucker's comment about his parents and fireworks was...funny. I liked the name of the Feather Fryer, too. Well, anyways. Just saying it's good. Sincerely, H.P. Farmer |
| theysayitscrazy 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAww! I miss them. Is there any chance that you'll do a sequel? I love Tucker. |
| jct7 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI like the whole fireworks theme/metaphor. You seem to do a very good job with a dialogue, perhaps you could add a little more description. |