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| W. Griffin 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abusewow. that is really good. by frightening... :-) -w. griffin |
| CatChewer 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was a little depressing. But I guess it shows how easily ones mind is inclined to wonder about the end, such as in the poem. It was good, I liked it :D |
| itsonlyme07 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseheh, i understand what you mean about not being depressed but writing that way. I really like this poem and it doesnt seem too depressing for me. Good job! itsonlyme07 |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseActually, truthfully - this isn't that bad. I think I like the quick flash of the tree swaying the most; it's unexpected, a beautiful image amongst the 'ugly' emotions that you are dealing with here. I do however like the metaphor of ending, the branch snapping it is ending, we will all end someday. You definitely hit that home. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |