i love the personification and the metaphors... awesome piece

Ah, a good job, you captured well the feelings of loneliness, of which I could relate to well. Especially the lines, “I can feel its cold hands in me. / Trying to bring those thoughts I have tried to push away. / Those doubts I try to forget. / Those feelings I thought gone” were well written because, well, just because it’s almost exactly how I feel. Overall, you wrote this befittingly, with a seemingly good notion of what you were writing about. Excellent.