AW. BRIGHT IS SO COOL. AND HE HAS A COOL NAME. WAHAHAHHA.

Great story!

Aww, Andrew and Maria are so cute together! This is a great story!

Lol, Lifehouse songs three chapters in a row! It's cool, they're awesome-the band and the chapters. This story's really good!

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think what makes it such a good story is because it has some real depth to it. I could really understand the emotions of the characters. If I was ever in the same situation as Maria I would probly feel the same exact way as her and that made me get really wrapped up in the story so I couldn't stop reading until I finished it.

omg XD i love your story so far :D ive laughed my ** off and ive teared up. the emotions are completely raw and i feel like i am Maria XD your an amazing writer :D

Great story! I think I'm in love with Andrew and Bright. Great characters.

At first i wanted Maria to end up with Bright, but after seeing how he was the one to encourage Maria to go and get Andrew, i kinda changed my mind. i never thought that Bright would do something like that because i thought he likes Maria.. he's really kind :P i didn't expect the thing with Bright and Brooke suddenly dating but they make a really good match except the fact that Brooke cheated on Bright.. Maria and Andrew loves each other so much! nice story :D

i have been reading for some time now, it's been ok so far since this chapter, too much drama. these girls have too much baggage. i'm surprised Maria still hasn't killed herself really! why isn't she even on therapy, and Brooke getting raped means her ** has grown it's own head? so therefore she can't control whom she has s3x with and her ** decided to do another man?

I like this story! It´s good!

and I couldn't tell you
why she felt that way
she felt it every day

and I couldnt help her
I just watched her make the same
mistakes again

Whats wrong
whats wrong now?
too many
too many problems
Dunno Where she belongs
where she belongs

she wants to go home
but nobodys home
its where she lies
broken inside

her feelings she hides
her dreams she cant find
shes loosing her grace
shes all over the place- a- ace

this story is so good!
I just spent the past like, four hours reading it (:
haha, you're a wicked good writer and yeah... xD

love it

I loved it, you really did an amazing job with this story. I read it in one sitting it was so good! Great job!

hey gr8 story rly enjoyed readin it pls let me knw if u hav any othr free reads