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| My Brighter Darkness 2007-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseM, that was interesting. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseha, I got two different interpretations of this: one being that you wrote this in seriousness, and if you did, it's very abstract, but probably one of the most unique things I've read. ever. period. amusing- especially the line about the puppies. maybe there's a deep message hidden in here about society, but I'm not that deep. the second is that you're mocking us all for being self-serious idiots so you wrote a poem that makes no sense to see what we could decipher- not saying that it doesn't, this is just me speaking objectively, which, either way, your poem is still amusing. I'd like to read more of your stuff. so, in the end, nice work anyway. |
| Asinine Epiphany 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds good but it's hard to tell what it means. Form what I can gather, what you're saying is: pop culture is growing more and more meaningless, religion makes no sense whatsoever in its rituals, and the last line escapes me completely. I don't even know if I interpreted the first two parts right...but all in all, it wasn't bad. A little on the short side, though |
| Naomi Chick 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseokay, well I working on editing the first story I start. Than I will edit the other story. |
| Scarlet Black 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI have to say that this poem made absolutely no sense to me. There doesn't seem to be any story line or theme to it at all. It sounds like you just tried to make up the most bizarre phrases you could think of. |
| rust phoenix 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, deep and meaningful. It's a horror all right. And a tragedy. But it's hilarious! |