I love it. It reminds me of my past.

Cool! Really, really well written.

;-D

Good piece. Can't help but think of the Winchesters - what can I say :) The line breaks and rythym of this is just wonderful. One of your best.

This was really good! It was an enjoyable read...it almost seemed more like a song...seemed like it would make a good one too..to me..

"Because-no one is invincibleAnd everyone finally falls."

That is very true, no is invincible...everyone has an end to their life story...Great job with this! Keep writing!