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| shooting stars and secrets 2006-07-28 ch 1, | This poem showed so much, and i appreciate how hard it was to write it, as it is often hard for peple to write straite from the heart. I have three poems that hurt so bad to write, i almost didnt write them- take a look at them some time- their called " Whats Left of Me, Cold Lying Lips, and Twisted Emptyness" Keep up the good work! |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-07-05 ch 1, | That is so sad. I don't know if this is personal experience or not, but it really is awful how people treat each other. But this is a very expressive piece with a lot of raw emotions and I like that about it. You should check out my poem "Between the Raindrops" |