oh no he trusted the wrong man, what's going to happen to him?

:DD
i just read fear not the wolves and found this story as well. this story is really good so far! please update soon! :D

No! Will they ever meet Bryony anytime soon? Thanks for the update :)

Woho! An update! That said, I like your style. You seem to have mastered the art of using paragraphs (rare here on fictionpress) and you actually bother to describe things (in terms that aren't annoying). I'm also rather fond of the relationshipe between Rhian and Raul. It seems really truly sweet without being saccharine. You rock. That is all.

Please consider updating this story. There is so much potential here. There are interesting and developing characters as well as a well-paced plot.

Come back!

I like it. Keep writing please?

It's been a very long time since I've last checked for a new chapter, but I've not forgotten this story. I'm pretty sure I never left you a review, either, which is just indecent of me. In any case, I hope to make up for it with your subsequent updates.

I enjoy your style very much. The words you have written reflect the relationship between Raul and Rhian so beautifully - I can just feel the up-and-down, the tentative, delicate, curiously anxious. There seems to be a great deal boiling beneath the surface here, and I'm looking forward to when it all overflows.

Your characters are the draw; your writing is wonderful - keep on keeping on. :)

YES! Chapter 12! Thanks for updating.
Oh...the wolves are coming this keeps getting better and better!! :D

An adorable chapter. I hope Bryony and the others will help Raul though, and not just "bring him back".

Rhian and Raul are so incredibly sweet. Although I think Raul *would* understand the concept of love if Rhian just had the guts to talk about it with him - he loves her already, doesn't he?

It's amazing how far you've come as a writer. This chapter made me feel everything with both characters.

This is GREAT! I NEVER expected this twist! I LOVE this story!
Please, please, please up date soon!!

Awesome chapter, by far the best yet...I've been reading your wolf stories for what seems years now...and this was your greatest work yet...not to put the past chapters/stories in shadow...but this was wickedly good...I hope that you start updating with more regularity and in a more timely manner...but I'll be reading your work as long as you keep writing about wolves...

Yours truly,
~Q-F~

You're back! Yay! :) Oh, and this chapter was absolutely wonderful. wow... They got kinda tricked into marrying each other... although they *could* have run away if they really didn't want to. :D I really liked the description of that kiss - it was so natural and uncliché.

I love this story! Can't wait to read more. (I hope they'll return to Toal and Delma, they're so sweet and good-hearted...)

Hey! love the story so far!! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE up-date soon!
Keep up the good work!