Really nice story. :) I like it when you put music,love and other stuff like the bike ride together in a story 'cause it all makes the story more interesting and different lines of stories. Love it.

Oh wow! A friend of mine shown me this and I just loved it! It has to be one iof the most dlightfully lovely things I have read! Your writting style is rather interesting, in a good way obviously. You have some serious talent going on here! I hope you can continue writting and npot get the dreaded writers block curse! xD

Rose

the story was so sweet.. =))

omg so cute!!

another cliffhanger wahh!

wow nice story it's like only one chapeter end but it's a nice story thnkas

that was so ...i dont even have the right word for it...it completely took me in till the very end you are a great writer

Wow,, U really are talented... I love all of your stories keep up the good work :)

Ally

did u right more? i luv this. =]

that is so cute! XD r u gonna put up more?

*wipes away tear* That was pretty... I like that... I guess life is like a bike ride... Sometimes it's bumpy, but sometimes it's so smooth you can let go and scream your head off. HAH, I have no idea what I just said. Good job tho'... I also like your story "Maid For Me." I begin to like Jaiden more as the story progresses..

I really loved this one! I played the game based on it too and I think you should maybe make a sequel. I love all your stories, and this is one of my favorites! But I think that you should put in more details of what Ari is like, in her personality that is. Keep the stories coming!

i love your books i'm a sap for love novels kepp those novels coming even if their not romance novels i just keep going i'm not going to get any sleep tonite lol

I'm interested to know about this "bike ride" quote.You seem to favor using it in your stories :)

ooh i relaly liked this. Im a sucker for a love story. lol! Thanx for the review

that was so god it made me cry