*GASP* Non-freeverse poetry on Fictionpress! *dies*

Seriously though, this was awesome. I like the whole feel of the poem, and the allusions you make in it.

My favorite lines are those at the end, especially, "And being nothing more than starlight, he can only be seen at night"

Awesome job, hope to be seeing even more wonderful stuff soon (and I'll definitely be checking out your profile)

~Besa (Kaethe Airlia)