Wow, I like this one as well! It's really well written, and I think the ending is really awesome. You have alot of talent. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

~Kaitlin

ya--this poem kind of reminds me of when my parents were splitting up. after they'd argue (or my mum would do all the arguing) she'd keep reminding me that people fight because "they think they have something to fight for."

eh. this is cool. nice and sweet.i like how its written.~Liz

That's a really good poem. I liked the way you bolded some lines and left the others with just italics. I think it adds style to your poem. Nice job!

I luved it!! It was beautifully written. I like how you put at the end that, "The ending is up to you!" Great Job!