i like this poem. although it does not rhyme it still flows and is easy to read. i LOVE the line 'i sigh gratefully content and vulnerable'. the last line is also really great, it really hits you and you can feel your want and need. u wrote this for me? OH AMI! we did walk side by side a week ago! hahahahahahah jokes... x x x x

O...nice..I always enjoy this level of intensity in auch a brevity of words. The peoms reminisces a strong but struggling spirit.Good job!

Great poem! Soo sweet. I like the thought of this alot - just letting go and giving into the vulnerability but feeling invincible because whoever's spirit is with you. At least that's what I got from it. Great piece!