Reviews for And All That Jazz

Reviews For: And All That Jazz

Crazy Dude, II 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseso beautiful. I love it.
CrazyMacy 2007-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay, I'm really not here to review this story, but instead to address your profile. Might I ask, what caused this flow of harsh words? It's quite a vent, I must say. I only have one thing to say: Do you notice how many Wal-Marts or IBM or Microsofts there are? WEALTHY is pretty much unattainable for everyone, regardless of race. Yes, I have ambitions and dreams, but do I expect to reach wealth? No. Sure, there are many who say "Reach for the stars" or "You set your own limits," but reality dictates. Wealth is a state that few reach. I know that I do have racial stereotypes that have been engrained into who I am because of where I grew up. But, racism is at the fault of the culture entirely. From all you've heard now you can probably conclude that I am a white female. So, that my invalidate my opinion immediately in your mind. But I feel that if people would stop obsessing over race and if they would stop acting as if they DESERVE something b/c of their race, then we could get somewhere. Yes, the fault of racism lies with the oppressors who started it, but the continuity of it lies with the victim and the former oppressors. You must understand, there are few people out there who WANT to be racist. Perhaps you can be a bit more understanding. Your profile is very accusing, as was its intention, I'm sure. One last question: From the way you talk it sounds like you are not from the US. Are you?
plural 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseI love this. Your words are beautiful and the descriptions are wonderful. The content is touching, too. I thought two paragraphs in the middle, those starting with "I won't make a sound" and "This is so painfully pointless", were a little weaker than the rest of the piece. Maybe the description gave way into telling? But overall, I love it. This is going on my favorite stories list.
Islandgyal2004 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseCool.
LEDlorien7 2006-07-14 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. it's very beautiful. it made me very happy. thank you for writing such a lovely story!
narcissenoire 2006-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI liked this very much! Usually oneshots annoy me and leave me wanting more but this was really good and the ending just fit perfectly. I also think it's awesome (and funny) that you wrote this during math class! :)
BreathingFlames 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful.
Hell's first Icicle 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseoh. nice. very, very nice =D plz tell me this isn't just a one-shot. continue! actually, it works quite nicely as a one-shot - onli if you want me to die of desperation here, tho. =P
The Fleff 2006-07-07 ch 1, anon.	abusem... I like the direction in which this is going. :)I shall patiently await more of.. anything you write. XD lol
Orangeena 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was great, very sexy. Too bad it's standalone. But awesome for having been written during math class (yech) :)-Abbey
Abstruse Blue 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseI don't really read femslash. But this was well written, good job. ^ ^
Love Eternally 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseam i correct in saying they're in for a hell of a night
paledaisy78 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseaww, i loved it!! this is a one-shot right? well anywho, it was fabulous. you used good imagry and writing in class rocks! haha.
XME-Witty 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseThis made me smile. Thank you for writing it.
Rayne Logan 2006-07-06 ch 1,	abuseThat's cute. I mostly write/read things that contain heterosexuals, but this makes a nice change. The only thing I can say is that your nice descriptions seem to waver at certain parts of the story. I loved the first half of it, you used perfect detail in describing what was happening, but this wavered towards the middle, and you picked it up again at a few random points, but it seemed to fade. Sorry. I'm being picky. I don't really like reviewing fiction without giving some sort of constructive criticism. Reviewing someone just to say "Oh, that's great, keep up the good work :)" just seems sort of... pointless. I love this though. I especially admire your description of Sophia. Well done. ^^

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