It is good so far. My gosh, you brought the news of the dad's death with perfect timing and it was shocking and very sad. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

that was great. i could really imangine what was happing.great details to.

like most i think the story starts off on a
(sad but)great start. i'm addcited to the writen word please write more

Nice job, I really was able to imagine everything, I don't think i saw any spelling errors... Again good job, and keep writing this

I'm not usually interested in gang stories, but I really like this one. Nice job, and please update soon!

I really enjoyed this story so far. It's got an excellent first chapter to kick it all off!
Hell, I've gone and added it to my C2 community! Good job!

this is a very interesting story so far = ) i cant wait to see what happens to Tyson and Michae. *Mel

This story sounds very interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

~M.V.~

Oh My Gosh... I cried My eyes out... wow... what a moving first chapter! Brilliant