I like poems like this. Really captures the reality of people, especially the ones you call your friends. Good job:)

I like the way this is broken apart, and the rhythm in it is cool.

Good job. "And I must say/I feel pain" - beautiful, you phrase things so well.

I was just looking through my reviews and noticed that even though you've read so much of my work, I've never read or reviewed any of yours. Shame on me!

I really like this poem. It reminds me of that song "You Live" by some woman whose name I cannot recall. I love the rythym of the words and the overall movement of the poem. Gret job!