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| Ramona122003 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like poems like this. Really captures the reality of people, especially the ones you call your friends. Good job:) |
| alice is dying 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the way this is broken apart, and the rhythm in it is cool. Good job. "And I must say/I feel pain" - beautiful, you phrase things so well. |
| dorkiss 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI was just looking through my reviews and noticed that even though you've read so much of my work, I've never read or reviewed any of yours. Shame on me! I really like this poem. It reminds me of that song "You Live" by some woman whose name I cannot recall. I love the rythym of the words and the overall movement of the poem. Gret job! |