|Reviews for Jealousy and a Boy|
| outoutbriefcandle 4/6/08 . chapter 1
It is good, but I find a level of difficulty in developing pathos for Kara. While I don't think it should be so easy to develop these feelings of attachment, I do feel they are necessary to connecting with a character.
| asteria24 7/7/06 . chapter 1
It wasn't what I expected; when I read the title I thought it would be about two friends fighting over a guy.
However, I think it would have been better if you had put the poem in the opening in quotation marks, to establish where the letter ends and the story begins.
| BarnBum413 7/6/06 . chapter 1
Aren't people stupid sometimes? I like it. cya tomorrow.
| Honor Bound 7/6/06 . chapter 1
thats gotta suck. very well writtin tough. try not to compare your self to others i think,you never can compare cause there is always someone who has what you dont, and you have what others dont. you are what you are.. good job.