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| Restless Thoughts 2006-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a wonderful poem. I can identify with some of it. This is definetly going into my favourites! Keep it up! |
| BroadwayStar-2 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem. It's sad, but sometimes in everybody's life time it's true! I plan on reading your stories, I hope they are good just like this. Thanks for the review and you are welcome for the update, another one is coming up soon! |
| Aurora Wendhart 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, even if it is dark and despondent. Kind of like the stuff I'm writing now...*sigh* But I like the imagery and how you rhyme so well. Just a couple, little picky notes: This might just be part of how you write, but it's not im, it's I'm. And no one doesn't usually have a dash inbetween. But otherwise, wonderful poem. |
| elilmare-phoenix 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem, It makes me remember what happens when anything is going right in life and you just want to runaway and forget it all. Just the feeling of trying to put things right. A very good Rhyme and full of feeling, congratulations. |
| fealoce-verity 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusewow i heart this poem its so sad yet its so strange how the sad poems and songs are the best...again, i love it :) |
| firestar267 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, whatever the inspiration was i'm glad you had it, this poem is really good. You captured the emotions very well and i liked the rhyming pattern - natural and not forced. I especially liked the line "The certainty fading, what’s left is the fear…". Very good job as ever, keep it up! |
| Jonathan Kimberley 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusedepressing but powerful, very well done another good poem. |