Wow, this is a great story!
1) My favorite scene would have to be when Riley and Ryan make out in the pantry.
2)The most memorable line for me would be, “I would just like to say congrats to you two. And well, Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time ‘cause well, I’d much rather make out with you than with Riley.” It's just hilarious.
3) My favorite character would have to be Ryan.
4) Yes, I felt the ending wrapped everything up. Sarah and Riley made up, Riley and Ryan got together, and Justin revealed the fact that he is gay.
5) I don't believe you, this is too good to be done by a first time writer. Unless you had a good beta reader.
No spelling/grammar errors spotted!
Sorry this review is so long.
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!

okay i've already reviewed chapter 15 of this story so i'm gonna have to say my piece here. i read your story likee a billion years ago. ok no im kidding, but it was around the time when you finished it or whatevers. i just finished rereading the entire thing again. lemme tell you, i felt like i had never read it (probably cuz it was so long ago) and i LOVED it even more this time around. it's such a cute & funny cliche. great job !

I like it so far. your writing style makes me laugh, and it's refreshing.

So cute. Love Ryan and Riley!

Ri

Answer some questions if you want-- I’m really interested in knowing what you guys thought:

1. What was your favorite scene?
the scene were she was about to rape justin hahha hilarious

2. What’s the most memorable line in the story?
justin-"I would just like to say congrats to you two. And well, Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time ‘cause well, I’d much rather make out with you than with Riley.”


3. Who was your favorite character?
Def. justin everybody should have a gay best friend

4. Did you feel the ending wrapped everything up?
yes

5. Could you tell I was a first-time writer?
not really it was pretty well written

love it!

This was a great story; I really liked it! Very well written and I loved the storyline. Riley was by far my favorite character. :) Good job!

I loved this story so sweet. You did a great job and really enjoyed your writing. Please write more stories like these they are my guilty pleasure lol. Thanks

IN LOVE!

oh i wonder wats going to happen next.
good stuff so far

Okay, so I just recently saw your story on another author's fave list and I just had to read it.

I finished it in one go...I was up until 3 am reading it i just couldn't stop!

My heart broke and lept for joy whenever Riley's did. So good job in making me about to cry at certain times (both bad and happy tears!)

Just had to say your kissing scene are awesome! Great story!

Oh my gosh. OK, so you just totally picked up on a weird thing that's happening to ME. I mean, I don't have a brother, unless you count my cat Henry. So there's a guy in my class, who I've always hated and who's always been a perv. He's always flirting with the girls and being creepy but there's no denying he's cute. So, I've never fallen for him, I've just said I have so I could hear what the other girls were saying about him. LOL. Aren't I slick? Well, anyway, lately, I've been seeing his cuteness and it's driving me a little insane. We're always throwing insults at each other, but like I said, he's cute. So I'm a little freaked out. So anyway, I loved your story! Sorry for going on a rant. Anyway, see ya! Write more! Bye!

Um ... wow! This is really great ... You should really try and publish this.

Hahaha I knew he was gay!
And aw to Riley/Ryan!