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amanda.xxx
2008-10-07
ch 15,
abuseAH!!
i absolutely love this story.
and the clichedness..that's the best part.
its good to find someone who likes happy endings and will actually write a cheerful story because they are so much better to read.
so, thanks for a great story.
it just brightened my day (:
x
chrissayyy
2008-09-09
ch 15,
abuseGreat story! Read it all in one sitting :D
xxx.You.Know.You.Love.Me.xx...
2008-08-23
ch 15,
abuseWOW...wow wow wow wow! Ya I could go on for a while more...OK so heres the dealio I absolutely LOVE your story. You definitely have the 'Girl falls for brothers bestfried' type 'o thing going on here. And not many people can make that work!! So...drumroll pleasse I am proud of you! I have read many cliche's (me being the hopeless romantic I am) and rarely ever say that! I haven't even reviewed a story in a few weeks cause I could not find a good cliche to read to save my life. Ok well He and Me gets the awesome honor or being added to my Favorite stories list.

Oh god if I sounded a little egotistical at in there then I apologize.

Lots 'o Love
x.You.Know.You.Love.Me.x
book.babe15
2008-08-11
ch 15,
abuseso cute! i loved it!
book.babe15
2008-08-11
ch 11,
abusehaha i called that!!
book.babe15
2008-08-11
ch 10,
abuseJusitn's gay isn't he?! that's the surprise...great chapter btw!
book.babe15
2008-08-11
ch 3,
abuseI really like this so far!
Electric Rose.
2008-07-26
ch 11,
abuseHahah I totally knew that Justin was gay - the clues were just a little bit obvious. i mean, how many guys would willingly sit through The Notebook? Lol.

Great story, I really love it so far :)
XO-Escape-With-The-Music-XO
2008-07-14
ch 15,
abuseFave Scene: hmm... i'd have to say... the scene when justin and riley made cookies! (hilarious!)
Most memorable line: ~I groaned in disappointment and replied, “Aww man, you mean my eyebrow wasn’t up?!” Darn those stupid eyebrows.~ That ALWAYS happens to me! my friends think its quite funny! I just slap any1 who raises their eyebrows around me now! lol
Fave Character: JUSTIN! haha that was easy!
Ending good: Yupp!
Could You tell i was a first time Writer?: Not at all, i loved this story!
Writing4Eternity
2008-06-30
ch 15,
abuseLOL
ThatGirl137
2008-06-29
ch 15,
abuseI love a good cliche! Congrats, its great!
clear vision
2008-06-21
ch 15,
abusehaha, this was cute. good job
clear vision
2008-06-21
ch 13,
abusetechnically, SARAH is the one letting a guy get in the way of their friendship because SHE'S the one not talking to riley BECAUSE of a guy. so it's not riley because she's trying to patch things up. if sarah wasn't letting a guy get in between them, she'd have been more civil to riley. duh. lol
clear vision
2008-06-21
ch 12,
abusewhat ever. sarah had to go down.
x3life
2008-06-12
ch 15,
abuseaw this was so cute!! i loved it =)
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