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| amanda.xxx 2008-10-07 ch 15,  | abuseAH!! i absolutely love this story. and the clichedness..that's the best part. its good to find someone who likes happy endings and will actually write a cheerful story because they are so much better to read. so, thanks for a great story. it just brightened my day (: x |
| chrissayyy 2008-09-09 ch 15, | abuseGreat story! Read it all in one sitting :D |
| xxx.You.Know.You.Love.Me.xx... 2008-08-23 ch 15, | abuseWOW...wow wow wow wow! Ya I could go on for a while more...OK so heres the dealio I absolutely LOVE your story. You definitely have the 'Girl falls for brothers bestfried' type 'o thing going on here. And not many people can make that work!! So...drumroll pleasse I am proud of you! I have read many cliche's (me being the hopeless romantic I am) and rarely ever say that! I haven't even reviewed a story in a few weeks cause I could not find a good cliche to read to save my life. Ok well He and Me gets the awesome honor or being added to my Favorite stories list. Oh god if I sounded a little egotistical at in there then I apologize. Lots 'o Love x.You.Know.You.Love.Me.x |
| book.babe15 2008-08-11 ch 15, | abuseso cute! i loved it! |
| book.babe15 2008-08-11 ch 11, | abusehaha i called that!! |
| book.babe15 2008-08-11 ch 10, | abuseJusitn's gay isn't he?! that's the surprise...great chapter btw! |
| book.babe15 2008-08-11 ch 3, | abuseI really like this so far! |
| Electric Rose. 2008-07-26 ch 11, | abuseHahah I totally knew that Justin was gay - the clues were just a little bit obvious. i mean, how many guys would willingly sit through The Notebook? Lol. Great story, I really love it so far :) |
| XO-Escape-With-The-Music-XO 2008-07-14 ch 15, | abuseFave Scene: hmm... i'd have to say... the scene when justin and riley made cookies! (hilarious!) Most memorable line: ~I groaned in disappointment and replied, “Aww man, you mean my eyebrow wasn’t up?!” Darn those stupid eyebrows.~ That ALWAYS happens to me! my friends think its quite funny! I just slap any1 who raises their eyebrows around me now! lol Fave Character: JUSTIN! haha that was easy! Ending good: Yupp! Could You tell i was a first time Writer?: Not at all, i loved this story! |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-06-30 ch 15, | abuseLOL |
| ThatGirl137 2008-06-29 ch 15, | abuseI love a good cliche! Congrats, its great! |
| clear vision 2008-06-21 ch 15, | abusehaha, this was cute. good job |
| clear vision 2008-06-21 ch 13, | abusetechnically, SARAH is the one letting a guy get in the way of their friendship because SHE'S the one not talking to riley BECAUSE of a guy. so it's not riley because she's trying to patch things up. if sarah wasn't letting a guy get in between them, she'd have been more civil to riley. duh. lol |
| clear vision 2008-06-21 ch 12, | abusewhat ever. sarah had to go down. |
| x3life 2008-06-12 ch 15, | abuseaw this was so cute!! i loved it =) |