|Reviews for He and Me|
| HighOnBrokenWings 6/3/09 . chapter 6
Loved it. The Brandon and Ryan relationship is SO cute! Hehehe
So, I was reading your profile, and I get what you mean by textbook smart. Unfortunatley Im mostly the opposite, which can be like torture... Anyway awesome chapter, he is kinda nice to her in an odd way... Great chapter, anyway, very well written, although there was part of it where there was unnessisary words, but I cant remember where that was... :D
| HighOnBrokenWings 6/3/09 . chapter 4
Aw... I think Justins kinda cute :D I dont really like Ryan all that much, he's meanly overprotective, but thats just my opinion at the moment. Ahh! These last few chapters have been awesome, your style is unique and not overly descriptive, which is good to read! Very very good story, I LOVE cliches once in a while. But do you know what I like more than cliches? Cliches that have a twist. Theyre the best. If this has a twist somewhere along the lines then I will be happy :D
Anyhow, Im favouriting this!
| HighOnBrokenWings 6/3/09 . chapter 1
Just asking, but isnt Ryan Evans the name of that dude off high school musical? Was that intentional? Well, anyhow, I really liked this :)
| pandaS2 5/29/09 . chapter 12
great story so far finally they meet! and hahaha i dont feel bad for sarah at all
| Stahlut 5/29/09 . chapter 15
Wow that was an amazing story. I loved reading the whole thing, and I actally read it all in one morning that's how good I found it. So yeah, you shoudl totally be happy with how fun and exciting this was to read.
| DCheerfulwitcher 5/16/09 . chapter 15
I love it! Though I may say that the story's a bit cliche - well everyone knows, who cares? - but I find it interesting. But I somehow I just happen to dislike Riley a bit not to mention that she was just so slow and bit of a retard when she felt like her life was too complicated but sometimes I find it alright so things can be interesting. I love the last part when Justin admitted that he is gay! LOL I swear that I could imagine Ryan's face after Justine said that! LOL
Anyway, great job! I will read the rest of your other works then!
mY FAV. character is Brandon cause he is the only one who never has any problems in this story. But here's a note, he's a freaking baby! What else do you expect from a toddler? LOL
My most memorable line will be the "I'm gay" sentence coming from Justin! It's soo cool!
So anyway, keep up the good work, Alyssa!
| cynthian 5/15/09 . chapter 1
her life became a cliche after you made it one.
LOL sorry had to :3
| georgie 5/15/09 . chapter 11
Yeh, slightly obvious that Justin was gay,
"I honestly didn’t mean to try and fit you into those stupid stereotypes"
um you do realise that that's kinda what you did right? I mean liking "the Notebook", not being good at sports, a slightly flamboyant sense of humour (ok i'm mainly thinking about the apron thing here)etc
| kcat 5/15/09 . chapter 3
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING THEM MARRY EACH OTHER!
I will actually love you forever just for that! Even amidst every cliche known to man :D (which I'm sure you know about and are absolved from due to this and the not making them marry each other thing).
Seriously you have restored my faith in humanity! Thank you!
| amezz 5/9/09 . chapter 15
Awe! This was really good! I'm so glad that they got together in the end! I totally called Justin being gay, like right when he said 'you'll make some other guy really happy.' I was so happy when I was right!
I really enjoyed your story, the chemistry between the characters was really good. And the corn quirk that Riley had really added something to the story. Very funny, and kinda random, I've never heard of anyone who likes corn that much!:)Very good job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!
| ookami-tamashii 5/7/09 . chapter 4
OMG XD i laughed so damn hard reading this chapter lol. GREAT JOB :D
| righthere431 4/18/09 . chapter 6
lol aw Ryan is so sweet with Brandon!
| righthere431 4/18/09 . chapter 5
Ooh! I want to go to a carnival now! lol.
| righthere431 4/18/09 . chapter 4
Ahaha cute scene. Ryan is a little demanding lol.
| righthere431 4/18/09 . chapter 3
Lol oh man, I was hoping she would get paired up with Ryan.