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| J. Lessard 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abusei like it a lot. i think you have a strong voice and it really comes through. kudos.xoxo. |
| CatChewer 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's funny how when every generation grows up, they feel the need to call themselves the wiser ones. I liked this part: "a self-destruction master". It is very true. |
| The Postscript 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseA little cocky, which brings me to say I really think your best point is not any of what you have written here - but what is in-between the lines. Those "adults of now" will not be here forever. They had better teach us what they did right, or perhaps, in this pessimistic view of yours, where they went wrong and what they could have done better. Time is not finite and sooner or later we will all become those "adults of now". Intriguing write none the less. Keep writing. |