holy **. that last line was a really really good twist.

This is so sad, it almost made me cry *sniffles. I liked the way you were able to show the emotions and give the feeling off strongly...

Wow, great ending. I had no idea that she was dead! I figured she was going to a clinic or something.

Very powerful, absolutey inncredible. I would definitely submit it!

: )

Oh wow...that is sad yet very well written. I say submit it in! This piece of work could win in my opinion.

aw.. thats really good. submit it.. you'll win!