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| Dracoliekje 2008-07-12 ch 15, | abuseCool story. The only thing that I didn't get, was why this story is M. You don't describe very 'shocking' things with adult content, or something like that. It could easily be T. Dylan is kinda bipolar, but still, in the begining I found it a bit strange that he was mean one moment, and then the next, Nikki is dating him and they are all happy and fluffy and stuff. But it was a fun story to read ^^. Keep writing ;). |
| selfish4more 2008-03-12 ch 15, anon. | abusenow i am pissed off how the hell. no no no this was just to dam mushy the hole thing just got messed up the part with hot guys was cool but why the hell did it end so dam corny couldn't there be like a third guy fighting for her love and why the hell did she have to be such a loser and just so everyone know singel female's are not loser or gay just wanted to make that clear so i don't want to be a critic but write a better storie or change the ending of this one. |
| mbcrazychick2011 2008-02-22 ch 15, anon. | abuseI really liked this story a lot. The ending was a little.. shaky, but from your comment at the bottom i believe that you know that. The plot however was interesting, and still has alot of potential. Chao xoxox mb |
| mbcrazychick2011 2008-02-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseuh, in your comments at the bottom of the chapter I noticed two words( actually i read all the comments but W.E) they where Dylan and fetish, yes yes yes. I know that you already finished this story but fetishes are SO HOT, try using them in your other stories, please! |
| mbcrazychick2011 2008-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei love this story so far, and Im only on the first chaprter. Im not sure what one does n reviews, because im new to this site.However Im guessing that you get to review the chapter (bear with me and my slowness please)or do you put hat you though of the chapter hered. Im confused. Anyway on a brtihter noter the charcters are characters that i can realte to, or believe that they are real. The main character Dylan sounds super sexy, Nicole sounds like someone ill like, and my heart aches for Tim, while I want to slap Ally. In conclusion : me likey likey (hehehe _ this is my giggle) You are a very talented writer. I hope you write more exelent stories like this one. (going to chapter two now : ) |
| Strangely Natural 2007-11-23 ch 15, | abuseCute, I like that there was no violence of any kind or substance abuse, overall it was nice. |
| multiples of six 2007-10-18 ch 15, | abuseAww, how cute! This was a really sweet ending. I liked this story. =) |
| AvidReader22 2007-10-16 ch 15, | abuseaw im sad its over. It was kinda quick, but I liked the story! definetly gonna read more of your stories, and I hope that you do come back to this story sometime, I would really like to see what it could turn into. |
| AvidReader22 2007-08-14 ch 14, | abuseomg i love this story! i just read all the chapters tonight and i cant wait to read more. especially since it ended like that. by the way: i had a hunch that Tim was gay! |
| seekingvirtue17 2007-08-10 ch 14, | abuseI love how this story is going so far...Can't wait to read the next chappies! |
| merrymowmow 2007-05-29 ch 14, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| blondiexoxo 2007-03-22 ch 14, | abuseaww i really love this story so far i hope u update soon. i wanna know what happens |
| shadowroamer 2007-03-19 ch 14, | abuseDylan is making me so mad! I just want to open a can of whoop ass on him! I like Valentine's cookies since I don't have someone special snogging me to look forward to lol any way I think the story I would like to read next would be I Don't Like Mondays. As before of course I like it hehe BYE! |
| CorpZ 2007-03-19 ch 14, | abusecant wait for the next chapter ^_^ |
| multiples of six 2007-03-19 ch 14, | abuseOh man! Write a femmeslash! And one revolving around Facebook? I'd die. XD Yeah. Good chapter.. update soon! =) |