 Sean McGuire 2007-07-11 . chapter 1Loved it. Creative. And I'm surprised Ms Pretty didn't sneer at her while she gave her the napkin! |
 Patricia Louise 2006-08-31 . chapter 1This is a sweet little story. What was the inspiration? |
 inevitableandunfortunate 2006-07-28 . chapter 1this story is so heartfelt and almost fairytale-like.
i like it. |
 NO LONGER USING 2006-07-24 . chapter 1aw so purfect...how cute...I loved this |
 Anne Ominous 2006-07-17 . chapter 1Total lurvage. |
 les petits bateaux 2006-07-11 . chapter 1this is very cute. though, it seems quite predictable at the ending, when 'Ms. Pretty' hands the protagonist the napkin. i liked the ending. it was somewhat...teasing. haha.
-trinity |
 ADSpencer 2006-07-10 . chapter 1Awesome work, Kimmi! I luved it! I want a napkin. |
 xillbeyourcupid 2006-07-06 . chapter 1hehe. very adorable story. although you have a few spelling mistakes.by the way, if you have time, please review my story "A Senior's Guide to College or Something Like It" I would really appreciate your feedback! |
 Crazy Little Writer Chick 2006-07-06 . chapter 1This is so adorable! I absolutely love this story. |