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| DisturbedKittenWriter 2006-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseMy 100th review *throws confetti*! Ok, I am done now. On with the actual review :D This started off as such a nice, heart warming story with stunningly beautiful descriptions, then turns into a slightly ansty story with stunningly beautiful descriptions. I love it! Especially how you used the word 'freedom' at the begining and end. Clever and simply amazing, meghan. Keep writing :) Wishing you yummy blueberry bagels smothered in fatty, strawberry flavored cream cheese, Kitty(AKA the girl who is 'm'ing at her bagel right now o_0) |