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| DaveP 2006-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! Not exactly a happy ending! But I like that! Slightly confused at first but I got the grasp of it. I spent the whole second half thinking 'what on earth is going on?' and I'm not dissappointed by the explanation, it was much better than if there'd been a logical outcome. Few words were missing, but you can guess what was meant to be there. Well done, I'd like to think it's the start of something bigger. |