Well, it wasn't all that original, besides the fact it was about someone famous. Perhaps you could try elaborating on some of the things that make your love of this star different to a typical crush.

No offence intended, just trying to help, and I probably don't know what I'm talking about.

I loved this poem, for so many reasons, that I shall not list them all. T'woud take too long. The wording was imaculate and I loved your use of description, which made reading even better. Nice work!

-Lacee