Great story, keep up the good work.

I goddamn loved this story! :P It was amazing. I loved Laban! His character was awesome. At first I thought Nikita was weird like one of those freaky old-school vampires, haha, but I guess he is but then as the story went on and it just became normal, I guess. I mean he really went all out for the Dracula mansion and all. I was expecting a coffin for a bed...that'd be really uncomfortable to have sex in. I knew someone who had a coffin for a bed once. His dad was a coffin maker and one time they had made it the wrong size or something so he put it in his bedroom. It was lined with red satin and the lid was nailed to the wall after one time it closed. That'd be freaking terrifying. Like being buried alive *shivers*. But at least Nikita's house didn't have a dungeon. Although that'd be sorta kinky for a vampire to chain someone down there...bondage. Kinky. I was expecting some major S&M in this story. But I liked the story. I loved Miko. I wanted a sex scene with Laban and him! That'd be hot. Maybe they could threesome with Nikita. Or Rama. I loved him! And his and Sascha's relationship. And I found the idea of a vampire being in a ** magazine hilarious. Although they are creatures filled with lust and are gorgeous which is always a plus in a **, haha. I thought it was weird though that Nikita got all angry about his picture in the magazine when he has his photo took by Jene all the time. I guess Stallion and Fin must read a lot of **. Now THAT thought is hilarious. Other than that I love how hot-headed Laban is. I wonder if he's a natural redhead. Anyways. I loved the story. It was good.

You should really try to get this story published. It was really great. I wish I could write half as good as you. In my eyes it was perfect, you don't need to change a thing. Maybe fix the spelling and grammer mistakes but that's it. But I'm not getting to in deep with the spelling and grammer, cause I suck at it myself. But any way, great story. keep up the good work.

P.S
Maybe you could write a sequile to this. That'd be pretty great. ^_^

Nikita sounds pretty hot. I hope he doesn't plan on hurting Loban to much. lol. Any way, I'll read the rest in a bit. Just making this post right now to mark where I was. ^_^

This was a really funny and amazing story. I'm glad I found it. I would suggest you reread sometimes because you have a few spelling mistakes due to fast typing, but after that it's a really good story.

I liked the story, it was interesting and I am sad to see it end. The ending was okay, but, and I am sorry to say this I thought it could have been better, it just didn't seem to fit the tone of the story unfortunately.

I am enjoying your stories, and I have read part of this before when it was incomplete and then I lost it somewhere along the way, but there are a few issues I have with your stories.

Your grammar ane typos are quite frequent here, and yes I understand as a fellow author that not every mistake can be found, and that everyone has their days, I am merely suggesting that they need to be touched up a bit.

Sorry for the heavy critiscism and I hope I didn't offend you too much.

I've read better but still it's good so far...

teehee. I came back for seconds of this story and fell in love with it all over again ^_^

LoL, that ending made Mikhail sound like a puppy. You know, sitting by the door, waiting eagerly for master to return... sorry...it just seemed funny ^_^

excellent work!

Aw... damn, I so wanted to know what the film Laban did was like. But to tell you the truth, it's quite logical it turned out like that. Modifying the film - yeah, something the bastard would do. *giggles. I have to say, I'm curious about Fin and Stallion. So I'm off now. Until the next review... Hugs, SH

This is really promising!I like, I like!! Of course, I love evil, possessive vampires... *insert grin, while imagining NikitaXKeenanXEricXLaban. I know, I'm a perv. I'll try to review, although it's hard for me even to read :(. But I am making an effort and I started your new fic. Hugs, Scarlet

well, i'm getting ready to read your story. Sounds very, very interesting. i'm prointing it because i can't look at a computer screen for too long. it really hurts my eyes. anway, i promise i'll review the whole thing when i'm done, which should be in a day or two. peace.

How the ** can someone write 27 ** chapters. Do you have a life. This isn't a flame. I'm just surprised someone has the time to write 62,090 words. Insane much!
Bye for now.
P.S. Seriously is writing all you do or do you have friends, family, and/or a job?

Hey again.

Absolutely loved this story. Really cute ending, too. Sorry, I'm a bit weak for comments now, it's about 11 pm.

But, yeah.

Really enjoyable story with great characterisation. I loved how it unfolded and everything and one came together. Fantastic job :D