 Bitter.Sweet.Endings 2006-07-26 . chapter 1This is... Amazing. I love it. It's so... Abstract and... awesome... and... lovely... This is... probably the best poem I've ever read... This is Deffinatly on my favourites. forever. I love this, how it flows, and changes, and... sigh. Even though it's mostly quotes, You are very talented, just for expertly picking them and glueing them together... I love it. |
 Devin-Jamie 2006-07-26 . chapter 1"There’s poetry on her arms"
I love that line. It calls to me, it reminds me of me. And it inspires me. And i just wrote a new poem, that's the first line. I couldnt NOT use it-im sorry, i tried.
This poem, once again, just moves beautifully and sets this inspirational mood. |
 Tender Sugar 2006-07-11 . chapter 1I truly enjoyed this piece! Most memorable were the last 4 lines, they were very deep and moving. The imagery and depth overall is stunning. Great job! - |
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