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cls81690
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Both as back-story and as a one-shot in itself, it's touching and sweet. Kouki comes off as a generally good guy, although it helps that it's his point of view, and it's nice to understand how things happen. It's not a sad story, but the ending isn't happy. I like it.
angel1357
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseWow... I really like it. It's alwasy nice when people explain the backrounds of characters.
lilxseeker
2006-09-07
ch 1,
abuseaw this short story makes me like kouki a lot more! i feel bad for him! great job on this!!
A.realistic.romantic
2006-08-06
ch 1,
abuseWell. I have to say that this was by far one of the most interesting things i've read lately. In a good way.

It WAS a little rushed as you said, but it didn't take away from the story itself.

Very creative, can't wait to see where it goes.
atreyu love
2006-08-05
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE KOUKI!! ITS SO SAD THAT AKINA DOESNT LIKE HIM LIKE THAT >_
Akia Blakemore
2006-07-20
ch 1,
abusehey, i definitely like this. i like how we get to know more about Kouki, and how Alex & Kouki met.

Just have one small correction for ya: "eiga" is Japanese for "movie." Not "English." "English" is "eigo."

Nice work though. And hope you had a great time in Japan, I'm jealous.
Sam
2006-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe last sentence made me shuddered. Now I really wish that Kouki and Akina ended together. *sniff*
Jaeiyola
2006-07-08
ch 1,
abuseAH! Thats was wonderful. Really sweet. =] Aw, now hearing Kouki's side of the story, I feel sad for him. Some parts of me wants him and Alex back together again. Arg, hard decisions. Love it
twistedFAerieTALes
2006-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abusei am a kouki fangirl. lmao.
Kagamiko
2006-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's an interesting point of view; I like it. One of the best things an author can do is show multiple sides of the story. Also, I actually kinda liked Kouki from the start(actually, I think it was his hair...*drool*). Anyway, you COULD continue on with this though, but I still say that I like K for Catcher better.

However, great job!
EoSpHoRuS
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseBRYCE DID! BRYCE TOOK IT!

You know...I really don't know why I don't like him much...but I enjoyed that. Gave a little background info that helped a bit. Very good, kelkel.

~Meg
green.ketchup
2006-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abusecan you hear my heart breaking? *sob* *sob* am i the only one that likes kouki for akina? even if "someone had already taken her heart" oreven if you write it out in big bold letters that akina will end up with bryce

you know its just weird...usually when i read stories i often side with the author's choice of partner...but in KFC when kouki came into the picture everything just tumbled over...there's just something about him...i feel so sad now...

by the way, just wonderin where you got kouki's name? from kouki of KAT-TUN? haha its so funny because i don't really like koki of KAT-TUN that much but i like your kouki though.

update soon! ganbatte! p(^_^)q
Chronic.Vertigo
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuse*sobs*

That's SO SAD!

Poor Kouki...
Jenneration
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseWHAT DO YOU MEAN WE MIGHT HATE YOU?! Oh no...that means something will happen in KFC...something bad? something I won't like...someone...or something...uh oh...but what...what?...or maybe it WILL be fine with me? I don't know...I'll just have to wait until the chapter comes out...yes, yes...that's what I'll do...

ANYWAY, good to see Kouki's side of the story. "And yet...Somehow I knew...Someone had already taken her heart." haha, I loved that part. Her heart must be taken by Bryce!...hopefully. :)

I'll be voting for KFC! :D -keep writing!

|:x:| Silent-Rebel
raelia
2006-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh yeah I forgot. What does Ikisatsu mean?
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