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| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 32,  | abuseAh Prometheus, splendid! The first stanza is quite rich, and then the rhetorical questions are quite insightful. |
| 1Wanderer 2007-04-23 ch 2, | abuseYour preface reminded me of the movie 'Blood Diamond'. Your poem is really good and well thought out. I enjoyed it. You might like my poem Night Storm, it's similar in deapth to yours. |
| simpleplan13 2007-02-03 ch 31, | abuseI like this... its such a sad enging.. although it wouldve been sad no matter who won I guess... but still.. |
| diffident 2006-08-09 ch 5, | abuseWow, I really do love this one to pieces! It starts out very brightly, but it grows ill in the second verse, and the third one explains life and death and the cycles that make up the ENTIRITY of nature--I have such passion in the belief that cycles are how nature thrives (and that humans are on a one-way path of destruction). Absolutely gorgeous! Wonderful job! marie |
| diffident 2006-08-09 ch 4, | abuseI was at that point several months ago... Thankfully, my desire to be alone came with my depression, and at the moment, that depression is gone, so yay! Anyway, this was well written and intriguing. marie |
| diffident 2006-08-09 ch 3, | abuseThe fourth verse is absolutely gorgeous: "reflecting malaquite green grasses' sheen, / as yellow fills our heart with reveries, / and memories of fires inside a cave". Just wow. That's brilliant. marie |
| diffident 2006-08-09 ch 2, | abuseGorgeous, evoking trails of hope and images of moon-lit clearings. marie |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-24 ch 30, | abuseinteresting.. I like the whole concept of what youve learned about yourself.. well done |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-24 ch 29, | abusekinda creepy, but well written |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 28, | abusei like this... kinda like a story |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 27, | abuselol.. i like it |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 26, | abuseinteresting & thought provoking |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 25, | abusepretty and sweet |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 24, | abuseI like the knife thing & the last line |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-23 ch 23, | abuseI love this.. extremely beautiful |