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Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 . chapter 32
Ah Prometheus, splendid! The first stanza is quite rich, and then the rhetorical questions are quite insightful.
sTrive 2007-04-23 . chapter 2
Your preface reminded me of the movie 'Blood Diamond'. Your poem is really good and well thought out. I enjoyed it. You might like my poem Night Storm, it's similar in deapth to yours.
simpleplan13 2007-02-03 . chapter 31
I like this... its such a sad enging.. although it wouldve been sad no matter who won I guess... but still..
diffident 2006-08-09 . chapter 5
Wow, I really do love this one to pieces! It starts out very brightly, but it grows ill in the second verse, and the third one explains life and death and the cycles that make up the ENTIRITY of nature--I have such passion in the belief that cycles are how nature thrives (and that humans are on a one-way path of destruction). Absolutely gorgeous! Wonderful job!

marie
diffident 2006-08-09 . chapter 4
I was at that point several months ago... Thankfully, my desire to be alone came with my depression, and at the moment, that depression is gone, so yay! Anyway, this was well written and intriguing.

marie
diffident 2006-08-09 . chapter 3
The fourth verse is absolutely gorgeous: "reflecting malaquite green grasses' sheen, / as yellow fills our heart with reveries, / and memories of fires inside a cave". Just wow. That's brilliant.

marie
diffident 2006-08-09 . chapter 2
Gorgeous, evoking trails of hope and images of moon-lit clearings.

marie
simpleplan13 2006-07-24 . chapter 30
interesting.. I like the whole concept of what youve learned about yourself.. well done
simpleplan13 2006-07-24 . chapter 29
kinda creepy, but well written
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 28
i like this... kinda like a story
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 27
lol.. i like it
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 26
interesting & thought provoking
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 25
pretty and sweet
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 24
I like the knife thing & the last line
simpleplan13 2006-07-23 . chapter 23
I love this.. extremely beautiful
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