good job with this one. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

KML92

Very nice! Very good, I really love the strength of your words in this poem, very very good.

Love,

Dia

Good poem. "Its" should actually be "It's".

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have an excellent day.

Twilight Starr

Very nicely portrayed.

I like this idea, the begining especially, but some of the rhymes seem forced and mess up you're rythem.

I love the cadence of this piece. Very emotive.

rememinds me of my life right there..

heyy!this is really good...i love it.

another good song. is there any truth in this one? :)

awesome job. keep it up.

- devil in a midnight mass

i can relate to this one and you have portrayed the feeling well. another good peice of workx

um I'm lost I understand but then it doesn't make sense well to me but anyways you have good taste in music l.o.v.e taking back sunday.

I can really picture this to music, running through my head, and it's catchy too. Great work.

-Dynamic Equilibrium

Love it!

Interesting vibe with this one...I like.

very nice, well done _ thanks for you review