Oh how funny. (No, I'm not being sarcastic.) And an interesting idea as well...

Really, though, I liked it a lot. And the style...well, let's just say I want to try writing in it sometime.

O, funfunfun.

I've never actually seen anything written in this style before (except written by myself). And I enjoyed immensely!

lol, that's clever. It reminds me of the Beetlejuice movie where the couple was wondering around the afterlife for some reason. Imagine that, people in coma having a tour before they die.