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Reviews For: Secretly Sick

Lientje46
2006-09-28
ch 1,
Wow, this is beautiful! I can really relate to a lot of things in this poem. Keep your head up high and don't let it get to you! This is a great poem, you capture the emotions very well.

X Lien
NO LONGER USING
2006-07-22
ch 1,
portrays strong emotions and shows the character's agony. well done!
miss-hyperactive
2006-07-08
ch 1,
this is awesome.. i can relate!
The Melissa Occult
2006-07-07
ch 1,
They say she died of a broken heart. At least, they say, it was a poet's death.

EiB

(PS, what's "Matt"'s problem with Author's notes? I like them, they give me a little bit to go on. Sure they might not be professional, but they're nice, and I think that they add to the experience of reading it. Instead of reading a poem, you read it with a sense of purpose. Unless you're cryptic and don't want anyone to know why you're writing, or you're really famous, it's interesting to see things about what authors think of their own work. If you say that the piece sucks, we can correct that view point, if you say it's awesome, we can also correct that. Hell, we're not pro's on here, this is to help people find their artistic selves. A doctor cannot help a patient unless the patient tells him where it hurts.)
Matt Sheard
2006-07-07
ch 1,
Don't try and justify yourself by adding an A/N telling us all it's rubbish, that's our job. We'll make up our own minds, thank you very much.

Thankfully don't have to tell you it's rubbish because it's not. Again, a brilliant piece.

Matt
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