|Reviews for Roaming Pain|
| Twilight Starr 11/10/07 . chapter 1
| SirScott 7/8/06 . chapter 1
I like it. Good to see that you have posted a new poem.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
| Martin Peterson 7/7/06 . chapter 1
*Chuckles to himself* I like it! Well Put, but with a good, serious point at the end. I think perhaps you should say "With bags" rather than "With the bags" - you should only use 'the' if you've mentioned the bags before, but of course you may have intentionally done that.