Good poem.

Twilight Starr

I like it. Good to see that you have posted a new poem.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott

*Chuckles to himself* I like it! Well Put, but with a good, serious point at the end. I think perhaps you should say "With bags" rather than "With the bags" - you should only use 'the' if you've mentioned the bags before, but of course you may have intentionally done that.

Good work.

Matt