again... OMFG! these r so freaking amazing!!

interesting.. I wasn't expecting the ending.. I like the idea of the idea of him coloring the walls.. and how something that was seemingly horrible was actually good... the only thing is that one line in the last stanza seems a bit too long to fit with the flow..

that was a amazing journey to find itself

Your creativity is almost obscene. I love it. Good job.

I'm really awed by this, and the title and relation to crayons, in my opinion, adds to its power. I read your Black Crayon poem, too, and that was amazing as well. (:

i like the feling behind it. its great.

Wow, this is really good, cool, and any synonym. Meaning, it's great. It's a little creepy too, which is awesome. What I really like is the way the stanzas are broken. It has a good flow.

That's really cute. I actually really, really like this. It's a lovely idea. Made me smile. ;)

Keep writing!

Nice prose! Very creative subject. I had a dream once that I could breathe underwater. Those superhuman power dreams are great. Very determined kid to be focused enough to crayon his entire room blue.

i like it. interesting. creative.~Liz

*thanks for the review.

Wow, I really like this. Very interesting.

Very interesting. I really like this crayon theme of yours. :)

Oh, so beautiful and sad. Nice work!

Another crayon poem. Very good. Black represents his soul, and blue represents the ocean, his home. This was awesome. I don't quite understand how it would relate to a person, as in I don't see the metaphor, but then again perhaps there is no metaphor. Maybe it's simply a truth put into poem. Keep writing!

Oh I liked this a lot. Very well done.

Also, thanks very much for the review. I was going for something different hehe.