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Reviews For: Sleeping Beauty

TeaWithOnions
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseIt was ok. The "I was seven" parts kind of got annoying after a while. Maybe if you took out a few, it would flow better too.

And also I can't thank you enough for all the reviews. You are awesome!
Black Feather Quill
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseWow a very moving piece of work. Your grandmother would be so proud of you for this piece. Keep up the good work!

BFQ
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