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| TeaWithOnions 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was ok. The "I was seven" parts kind of got annoying after a while. Maybe if you took out a few, it would flow better too. And also I can't thank you enough for all the reviews. You are awesome! |
| Black Feather Quill 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow a very moving piece of work. Your grandmother would be so proud of you for this piece. Keep up the good work! BFQ |